Re: it's up, but doesn't work
With Mr Lucas doing the writing, they probably won't want to hear the dialogue.
Exhibit One M'Lud "I'm haunted by the kiss that you should never have given me."
Ford famously told George Lucas, concerning the clunky dialogue in "Star Wars," "George, you can type this shit, but you sure as hell can't say it."
Harrison Ford later confirmed this: "I told George: 'You can't say that stuff. You can only type it.'"
Mark Hamill, for one, was amazed at the dedication Ford put into each and every line, stating, "He'd written things in the margins, saying the same thing basically, but his way. He had an amazing way of keeping the meaning but doing it in a really unique way for his character."