Re: And after
Wow! That scored 4 on the Plain-English meter and 97 on the Gobbledygook meter! It would have got a 100 if it had used Paradigm and Synthesis.
I will be using the text above in our companies bid for the F-35 short range data port. I need at least 5 pounds of text to justify an IR comm link (like your TV remote from 1981) because they don't trust/understand Blue Tooth.
They never read more than the first three pages and glance and the TOC anyway.
/sarcasm... or not? You decide.
Biting the hand that feeds IT
